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As a fish, I cannot fly
Or walk
I just keep myself
Breathing water,
Hoping someday I drown.

As a goldfish, I lock myself
In a rounded bowl
No skies, no future
No waves or winds
I keep myself confined.

As a jellyfish, I go
With the flow
No matter how many
Miles away from home
Just try to be farther and farther

As a dead fish, I still
Being gray
Like storms
Too much water to fall
And grow the sea where I was born
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YH16 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
i just enjoy it very loud, i find very similitudes with myself, i think, but not for much longer i hope :D

deeply,and intense... however you write very nice!!
:blackrose: !!!
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:iconbyouin:
byouin Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
hahaha nice to know you can understand and see yourself on it, even it's a bit ^^
thank you!
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:iconyh16:
YH16 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
yes it is, but a lot! you don't know how much..
:blackrose:
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liloroxon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
i like it
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:iconbyouin:
byouin Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
thanks!
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zeroshii Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
wow....it's kinda impressive.. <3
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:iconbyouin:
byouin Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
thanks ^^
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zeroshii Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
no prob ^.^
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orangeregine Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
Very nice poem... :)
I like the jellyfish part..
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byouin Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
thank you ^^
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